My evaluation

presentation:
In our oral presentation we used a powerpoint and videos, and we have relacionated the explanation with the resources. So, I think that our mistake is the timing, becouse the presentation only last 10 minutes. Mark: 7'5

Body language and eye contact:
befor I watch the video of the oral exposition, i think that i looked the audience a lot of time, but now I know that I must improve this thing, becouse i maybe don't hold all the attention of the audience. I don't read a lot of time from my notes.
Mark: 7'5

Structure:
I think that we have doned a very good job with the structure of the exposition. We have organized all the topics and we have introduced them to the audience. In the exposition, we use conectors an markers. We repeat only the most important things for try to help the audience to remember it. Mark: 8'5

Content:
We have choised a very interesting topic, because everyone knows the name of Microssoft and Mac, but only a very little part of the class know's something about the Mac opereting sistems and a lot of details. I thing that we have get the audience attention using a opinions, questions and examples. Mark: 8'5

Language:
I tryed to introduce some modal verbs and another things to impove my language, and i don't repeat any word during the exposition. I use some fillers like well or for example. Mark: 8

Pronunciation & Intonation:
One problem with the powerpoint have influences in my exposition, and for these reason I have done a interruption.
Well, i know that my pronunciation can improve a lot, and for this reason I'll work to improve it for my next oral exposition. Mark: 7

Final mark: 7'75